The Sunday Poem: Kira Pelowitz...Plums

Good morning, Albuquerque! Good news! I had a conversation with Jon over the last weekend, and he asked me if I would like to hold down the fort here at the Ditch Rider all the way through to the end of August! Of course I said yes. I hope you all find that to be good news, as well! It's 8 am, or thereabouts, and I'm tired. I almost walked on my own eyes getting out of bed. And I need coffee. Stat. Or, STAT. Or whatever the term is when your episiotomy is defibrillated by an infarction of collateral hooptosis. But hey, insane hour of the morning or not, I am, as always, very glad to be here. Very. Listen, let's have a poem....

 

...So I love this poem by Kira Pelowitz; there's so much to chew on with her words here. She pulls us in with the very first line and keeps us with her throughout this mysterious, enigmatic poem with its music and idiosyncratic ("constellation laughter") lyricism. I first heard Kira perform this star-studded poem a short time ago at a local poetry slam in Rio Rancho, and I was completely moved and captivated by what she did with this poem. There's so much song and rhythm and strange simile energy in her phrasing ("boughs like the night sky"); there's nocturnal, celestial dancing a-plenty in this work. I also admire how she chose to close this poem out with a nice, delayed rhyme between the intense penultimate line and the final line, which truly “sticks the landing”. In a conversation I had with her recently, I asked Kira what her favorite thing about Albuquerque is and she had this to say: "My favorite thing about Albuquerque is the natural spaces preserved both within and without the city. Over ¼ of New Mexico is composed of National forests, and within these a treasure trove of things to explore and do. When somebody says something to the effect of “Albuquerque rolls up its streets at 8pm,” they’ve clearly never gone for a walk in the Bosque at night."

Very well said! Kira, the mic is yours...

Plums

 

 

 

The Summer drips down our chins,

in your front yard there is a plum tree with boughs like the night sky

You, having finally grown into your telescope

pick stars without a ladder

You, sticky with constellation laughter.

 

The week after, your yard erupts into a field of fallen stars,

the sidewalk streaks split second before dawn purple,

I know this is your favorite color

 

Here,

in the drive to the eclipse,

the transit of Venus,

all night to the meteor shower

there is more sky than we could ever swallow

so the windfall blooms into fields of mold.

 

We only call this rotting,

because we are not the ones feasting tonight.

 

But in the micrographs, mycelia looks just like roadways

traffic-jammed full of spores that are built for escape

each tuned to the pull of a distant star

so when you say

 

“Astronauts are a lot like spores”

You star-fisted boy

You astrophysicist picking plums with a biologist

I understand, maybe, the flash in your eyes.

 

This is the way the species survives.  

 

 

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Kira Pelowitz is a scientist’s daughter, a student of Environmental Engineering and Biology at New Mexico Tech, and a poet. Her fascination with both poetry and science started when she was young, and she relies on both to answer her questions about the world around her. She’s been competing in poetry slams in Albuquerque for several years, and has self-published a chapbook, Science. 

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Poetry submissions are welcome.  Email theditchrider@gmail.com.

Local Poetry Event News: There's an event happening on Wednesday, July 24th, at 7 PM at The Source for Creating Sacredness (1111 Carlisle Blvd SE) that you Albuquerque poetry lovers should know about: The ABQ Unidos Youth Poetry Slam Team will be featuring at the OUTSpoken Queer Poetry night, hosted by Erin Northern. This looks to be a fun event! I'd really like to see you all there. If you'd like to read in the open or compete in the slam, you'll need to be at the venue by 6:30 pm. They're starting the night off with an open mic to be held at 7 PM, and then the Unidos squad (Emily Bjustrom, Eva Crespin, Jude Marx, Matthew Brown & Mercedez Holtry) will take the stage. The slam will happen after the feature. According to the Facebook event page for this night, the open-mic is open to ALL and each poet will have 5 minutes. Additionally, topics for poetry are OPEN for both the open-mic and the slam. There's also a $5 suggested donation asked for at the door. I asked ABQ Unidos team member Matthew Brown for a hint as to what folks might be able to expect for this show, and he had this to say: "We've been producing a lot of personal pieces that have political and social justice issues weaved in. We're also working on a memorial poem for Carlos Vigil. These are our last sets of poems before we embark on Brave New Voices, and this time of year produces some of the most powerful, high energy work of the season." There you go - high energy and passion and strong writing and a remembrance in verse for a fallen friend. Let's be there. 


For more info: join the OUTSpoken Facebook group page or email outspokenqueerpoetry@gmail.com.

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Tags: Albuquerque, Mexico, New, Poetry

Comment by Margaret Randall on July 21, 2013 at 8:22am

Good choice, Rich, and lovely poem, Kira. Very evocative. The lines stay with you.

Comment by Merimee Moffitt on July 21, 2013 at 12:57pm

smart, beautiful, up close, tangible, scented and touched, tasted and dreamed--very fine poem

Comment by Rich Boucher on July 22, 2013 at 9:08am

Margaret - Thank you!

Comment by Zachary Kluckman on July 22, 2013 at 2:28pm

Another great poem Kira! Evocative, with rich imagery and voice. 

Comment by Teresa Gallion on July 22, 2013 at 2:35pm

Love the metaphor of the plum and the great imagery throughout the piece.

Comment by Dee Cohen on July 22, 2013 at 2:43pm

Lovely poem. Nothing like the sights sounds and smells of a summer night. Filled with possibility...

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